Improve your Writing by Removing Crutch Words.

Lorraine Ambers

Completing a rough draft of a novel is a huge success. However the real work comes from revising. Working with critique partners to help develop the plot and character arcs. But what happens after you’ve done a few rounds of revision? Where do you go next? How can you sharpen your manuscript?

We all have words that we over use, words that we rely on to tell or show the story. Words that we’ve peppered our page with. Soon, you and your beta readers will being to notice the words you rely on, and with diligence you can begin to remove them from your work.

Because I write fantasy-romance, I tend to over use body parts; eyes, mouths, certain gestures for my characters like shrugging or curling their hands into fists. When over used, our readers pick up on them, which brings them out of the story. These become…

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My June Poem

Things will get better with time, and there’s no doubting that. Be happy for no reason or rhyme! Play with a ball and a bat.

My June Poem

March 2019 Spotlight Author Serena Mossgraves

Author Serena Mossgraves writes Horror and Dark Fantasy for ages 18+ Serena Mossgraves is a twisted faery with the urge to scare the unwitting reader. Her dark tales of nightmares excite the unwary. She has been seen prowling around looking for new tales to twist and share. She is an avid reader who has always […]

March 2019 Spotlight Author Serena Mossgraves

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Indie Spotlight: Mystical Greenwood

MyIndieWriting

Hello, Readers! In today’s book blog tour, we spotlight a super creative fantasy work by Andrew McDowell: Mystical Greenwood

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A new business opportunity

luna's on line

a picture of a chocolate cakeSparky was sitting on the table reading the latest edition of Magical Creatures Monthly. He was studying a tempting-looking chocolate cake recipe by a dragon from Wisconsin, when with a loud pop and a puff of pink smoke, a small rectangular object landed on the doormat.

‘What was that, Sparky?’ called Alys from where she was busy cleaning her cauldron.

The diminutive dragon flew down to inspect the recent arrival. ‘It’s a Magical Messaging Machine. How exciting!’ He poked it gently with a small purple claw. ‘Oooh,’ he exclaimed through a shower of excited sparks as the screen sprang into life.

Alys hurried over. The Magical Message Machine pinged loudly and the large friendly face of George the Dragon filled the screen.

Alys and Sparky exchanged glances. Even though George had made a huge mess of Alys’s herb garden when he’d visited, and hadn’t actually turned out to be…

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Musings

Dirty Sci-Fi Buddha

In the long run, the courage to try outweighs the fear of failure.  Life is like speed chess; as the clock runs out, I’d rather enjoy the game than shy away from making a move.

Get Echo Vol. 1 on Kindle here:  Vol. 1 on Kindle.  Vol. 2 on Kindle here:  Vol.2 on Kindle  Vol. 3 on Kindle here:  Vol. 3 on Kindle  Vol.4 on Kindle here:  Vol. 4 on Kindle  Echo Omnibus here:  Echo Omnibus  Echo Vol. 1 & 2 Combined Edition here:  Combined Edition  Musings, Volume 1 is available here:  Musings, Volume 1  If you wanna hear me babble on about anything and everything, and strain my FREAKIN’ BRAIN, then here’s a link to my podcast:  Strained Brains!  It is on iTunes, Stitcher, Spotify, and Google Play!  Please give it a listen and a five-star review!  Here’s the miscellaneous gear that…

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July 2018 Spotlight Author Deedra Nichole

Author Deedra Nichole writes Poetry, YA Fantasy, New Adult Sci-Fi, Fiction and Nonfiction for ages 12+ Deedra Nichole is an indie author whose experience in the indie publishing industry started in 2009. Deedra’s published works include: Confessions (Amazon, 2013), Kentucky Prose First Edition (Blurb, 2013 & rereleased version for Amazon, 2016), Louise Green & The […]

July 2018 Spotlight Author Deedra Nichole

May 2018 Spotlight Author Tish MacWebber

Author Tish MacWebber writes for all ages. She is currently planning to write fantasy as well as some sci-fi in the future. Tish MacWebber is full of surprises. Since November of 2016, she has been on a journey of self-discovery, which revealed that she was born to be a writer! In her spare time, she […]

May 2018 Spotlight Author Tish MacWebber

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